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Band 6+: You recently visited your friend's hometown for the first time. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank them for showing you around Describe what you enjoyed the most Invite them to visit your hometown soon

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Hello,

Dear Gursheen,

I am writing this to inform you that, i had a great time while visiting your hometown. It was one of the wonderful trip, I ever had in my life. Your hometown is really beautiful, calm and quiet.

The beauty of the bature attracted me the most. I was awestruck by the mountains. Another thing I loved about your hometown is welcoming and hospitable nature of people living there. It made me feel valued and welcomed. The fun fair we visited the other day in your village was so good. It reminded me of our childhood days when we used to play together. I had so much fun during the trip to your hometown.

I was hoping, if you are free or have some days off from your work, you could visit my hometown. I would love to invite you to visit my hometown. I look forward to your visit.

Take care,

Your friend,

Navdeep

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