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Band 8+: You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in your recently published advertisement flyers.

I am a 28-year-old woman who does not have a sports license or any experience in this field. However, I have recently decided that I want to change my lifestyle. I am aware that I love being in nature and I thought a trekking tour would be a good starter.

First of all, I need some information about the tour. Is this activity suitable for beginners? Do you have flexible dates? Additionally, if there is an opportunity to join a tour between 17th May and 5th June, I would like to purchase your mountains tour. I kindly request to receive a price list and details of the service included.

Lastly, I need to state my worries about the group’s sport level. Unfortunately, I may not be able to catch a sporty team while walking. For the first time, I would rather be in a beginner team and train with them.

Best regards,

Merve Akyüz

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The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear and concise explanation of the writer's interest, concerns, and requests for information.

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The letter flows smoothly and logically, with clear transitions between paragraphs and ideas. The structure is well-organized and easy to follow.

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The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some effective use of more sophisticated words and phrases. There is evidence of a good command of English vocabulary.

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