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Band 6+: You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this email finds you in good health and the best of spirits. I have seen an advertisment for a one-week walking trip and I would like to join the group. Therefore, I am writting to ask some questions about my concerns.

First of all, I would like to tell you that I am very excited because I am a nature lover person and I like to enjoy in open fresh air as well as cherish the view. I am an office worker and I have been recently overloaded with desk work. So, I need an amazing trip to renew my energy and come up with fresh mind.

Above all I mentioned about my excitment, I am cocerned about the trip dates because I have to take leaves from my office boss so that I can enjoy my trip calmly.

Furthermore, I do not have such physical activity because I have to work day or night at desk.Because of this, I am not physically fit. I am worried that how can I climb the mountains and enjoy the scenery view.

If you guid me about such things, it would be easy for me to go to a trip.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Faithfully,

John Smith

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Overall Band Score

6

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 4

would: 3

because: 3

enjoy: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The interest in the tour, fitness concerns, and requests for dates and prices are all clearly communicated. However, the structure could be improved for better clarity and flow.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by the structure and some unclear transitions between ideas. Improving paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there's room for improvement in range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the overall impression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys the main points, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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