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Band 6+: You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

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Good Morning Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to seek the details regarding the stroll tour on Ben Blue hills for a week, because yesterday I read the benefits of this breathtaking walk in the brochure and it caught my interest and I decided to spend few days of walking tour on Blue mountains.

While reading brochure, I was confused with dates and timings and want to clarify the details to select a convenience date for myself, because I like to join this tour after completion of my school exams on December 12. Before that, I want to mention that I am a beginner and have never tried the mountain trip in my entire life.

I want to be sure that this tour would be suitable for me, because I am new to this tour and my walking speed is not good like other people of my age, because I got injury on my left foot during my national tennis tournament. I want to know the length of the tour, because sometimes I am not able to complete long distance walking on plan road, so walking on mountain would be difficult for me. I hope that you will provide the information as soon as possible.

Thank you

Husanpreet

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Overall Band Score

6

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 5

walking: 4

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The interest in the tour is clearly stated, and the request for information on dates and prices is explicit. Concerns about fitness are also expressed. However, the structure could be improved for better clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter's message is generally understandable, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence. Improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would enhance the letter's overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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