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Band 6+: You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Amanpreet Singh, and I am writing to express my interest as a volunteer to assist in an upcoming welfare event.

I always love to help people, and this is the primary reason I am excited to apply for this role. My father worked with the charity organisation for around ten years, and I used to go with him in some events and this is where I started to love helping people and seeing smile on their faces.

In past, I have worked with, “Food for All” who distributes the free food to the homeless people. In addition, I was responsible for generating the funds for an event so we can provide food to more and more people.

I can contribute significantly to this upcoming program because of my past experience working with charities. I can be a valuable asset who can assist the organisers with raising money for the event, and distribute free meals on the event day.

Yours sincerely,

Amanpreet Singh

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Band 6+: You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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