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Band 4+: You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include • Why you are writing • Your suitability for the role • How you would approach the position

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Dear ser or madam.

I am writing this letter to you abaou advertise on paper that i just saw, in that advertise i got information that you are seach an employe for a property management position. And i interested with that position.

Let me explain to you why I am suitable for that position. I had five years experient as manajer in bank and one years as property manajer. I already have expert experient in management.

If you accept me for this position I can start work soon as posiable and I will give my best to help you manage everything in apartment complex.

I hope you will consedering my application.

Yours fairhfully.

Jack.

Punya saya nilai

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