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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image presents a bar chart detailing average UK salaries by city with specific population samples in brackets: London (33,634, 50,951), Manchester (25,909, 4,643), Glasgow (26,150, 3,113), Bristol (27,828, 3,111), Birmingham (25,531, 4,949), Edinburgh (27,592, 2,553), and Cambridge (29,854, 2,180).

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The bar charts illustrates the average salary in the United Kingdom with thousand people included as the participant. Overall, it is clear that average salary in the capital city of the UK has a major differents from another city.

Out of the six other city, London has the highest average salary along with the most participant involve for the survey. In contrast, Birmingham has only one-fifth and making it the lowest average salary with only 25,531 pounds, followed by Manchester and Glasglow. Interestingly, Edinburgh, Bristol and Cambridge classfied to low-medium average salary in the UK with the average salary above 26.500 pounds. Albeit at different average salary in each city, resulting in remarkably similar amounts.

But as we already know any possiblities can affect the salary at the city. However, they should expect equality salary to appreciate their work but also based on they workload not only based on location.

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The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies and some irrelevant commentary. The organization is present but could be improved with clearer paragraphing and transitions. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, avoiding personal opinions, and structuring the report with a clear overview, specific details, and relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are weak and lack a clear focus. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs more effectively. For example, transition words and phrases can help to guide the reader through the information. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the supporting sentences relate directly to that topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('major differents,' 'classfied'). To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of salaries and comparisons. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your range of expression. Pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and articles.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb forms ('charts illustrates'), subject-verb agreement issues ('salary in the capital city of the UK has a major differents'), and awkward sentence structures. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple and compound sentences correctly before attempting more complex structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation.

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