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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing the letter to tell you about our band want to practice at Happy City Community Hall.

Firstly, I want to introduce our group are classical musician group, we have 20 members, who is a student from Bangkok college, our group started this band for 1 year, since 2024.

Our band are definitely helpful for this community hall because our band can play classical song that other band cannot perform, and we have a social media profestional that can make everybody come to see the show in this hall.

If it possible can we use this community hall on Tuesday and friday after 6 pm.

If you have any suggestion for using community hall, please respond to me immediately.

Yours faithfully,

Jimmy

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

community: 4

group: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and persuasive in places. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar is needed.

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