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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or college lecturer. Write at least 150 words

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The image contains two graphs; the first graph displays the average number of hours worked per week with writers at 35 hours, doctors at 50 hours, chefs at 45 hours, lecturers at 40 hours, lawyers at 65 hours, movie producers at 75 hours, and business men at 55 hours. The second graph is a pie chart showing the occupations of people suffering from stress-related illness with business men at 11%, writers at 8%, doctors at 15%, chefs at 10%, lecturers at 25%, lawyers at 8%, movie producers at 18%, and programmers at 5%.

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The bar chart compares the figures relating to hours worked and, stress percentages between professionals in eight facilities.

Overall, the table shows avarage number of worked hours and the suffering people from stress such the; Writers, Doctors, Chefs, Lecturers, Lowyers, Movie producers, Programmers, and also Bussines men occupations. Another point is that the most increased job in worked hours is bussines man.

From first details we can mention that, Writers worked per week near to 50 hours, Doctors completely 50 hours, Chefs 25 hours, Lecturers is the professionals with the shortest hours of work among others, they work in a week less than 25 hours, Lowyers around 35 hours, Movie producers almost 60 hours, Programmers around 45 hours, also Bussines men works near to 75 hours.

From details of personalities suffering from stress related to illness, we can say that, Writers is 8%, Doctors 15%, Chefs 10%, Lecturers 25%, Lowyers 8%, Movie producers 18%, Programmers 5%, Business men 11% stress.Therefore the Lecturers are peoples with the highest amount of people that is suffering form stress to illness.

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hours: 11

worked: 4

stress: 4

lecturers: 4

suffering: 3

writers: 3

doctors: 3

chefs: 3

lowyers: 3

movie: 3

producers: 3

programmers: 3

bussines: 3

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The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The description of the hours worked contains several incorrect values, and there are also some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graphs and using precise language. Also, ensure that the overall trends and key features are clearly identified and supported by the data.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between the two visuals. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between ideas are abrupt. To improve coherence, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of incorrect word choice and imprecise language. To enhance lexical resource, expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use synonyms and varied language to avoid repetition. Pay attention to the specific context and choose words that accurately convey the intended meaning. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple and clear sentences, and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your confidence grows. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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