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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Emily,

I hope you are doing well and in the best spirits.Charles, recently told me that you have changed your school and are facing some difficulties.I would like to share some tips and recommendations,and I strongly believe that it will help you the most.

Firstly,try to help your classmates for anything they need rather than being introvert.Once you start applying this habit,you will notice difference in the bond with your classmates.Try to greet everyone around you with Thankyou,Sorry,Welcome,Please,Hello!,etc,this will bring everybody closer to you.

Secondly,I would highly advice you to join the clubs,extra-classes,and stay away from fights. Moreover,participating in each and every academic school activities rather than focusing only on scientific studies.Since,it will reflect on your extra-curricular activities as well as enlarge your friend circle.This will be cherry on the top,as your hidden talent will also be recognised,plus introduction will be done to other teachers,students.

Furthermore,I really want to you imply all my advices and hear your experience.

Thankyou and take care of yourself.

Warm regards,

Fatema.

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Overall Band Score

5.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

8
The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, offering relevant and practical advice to the friend. The suggestions are well-developed and presented in a clear, supportive tone. The letter is well-organized and demonstrates excellent control of language.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping related ideas together more explicitly. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more varied and natural. For example, transitions between paragraphs could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. While the letter avoids being overly repetitive, expanding the range of vocabulary could enhance the overall impression. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'help,' consider synonyms like 'assist' or 'support' depending on the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. Focus on improving accuracy in areas such as verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles and prepositions. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and apostrophes, to avoid ambiguity.

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