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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest of being a social event organizer during this month training program which i feel suitable regarding the various other opportunities I had at school.

In fact, in order to help effectively, it would like to have some information regarding the dates the events will took place, so i may plan my activities accordingly, like is everyone eligible for applying to this position or they are some specific requirements needed for this position, is there any experience required, is there deadline for requesting, are request formally made or a simple call suffice. Those information will guide me in this process.

In addition to my interest, i have been motivated by previous positions acquired during my professional and eduacational journey. For example, i have been in committee in charge of organizing party in my institution and this experience gained will enabled me to fullfill it once given.

Yours Faithfully

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing interest, requesting information, and explaining relevant experience. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, the second paragraph could be more concise and clearly structured. Also, the sign-off should be 'Yours faithfully' when the recipient is unknown.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping your requests for information into a separate paragraph for clarity. Also, ensure a smoother flow between your expression of interest, information requests, and explanation of experience.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more precise and varied word choices. For instance, instead of 'help effectively,' you could use 'contribute efficiently.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar and sentence structure need improvement. There are several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'interest of being' should be 'interest in being,' and 'will took place' should be 'will take place.' Pay close attention to verb tenses, prepositions, and article usage. Also, 'Yours Faithfully' is used when you know the name of the person you are writing to, in this case, use 'Yours Sincerely'.

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