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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Hamna,

I am writing this letter to suggest you that how to make friends and try to fit in to the new enviroment.In order to make new buddies you have to be talktative and approach the students that are of the same age group as yours.

Apart from that I would suggest you to join the school clubs and particiapte in the activities that are happening in the school.Also play sports with the students because playing sports would definitly give you the extra advantage to get closer with your temmates that will lead you to make friends.

So there is also something most important that you should consider as an general advice is be polite with everyone,dont’t fight,always smile while communicationg with the students.

These tips will be surely beneficial for you if you follow them.I would be very happy from hearing you back about your new friends.

Many thanks,

Ali

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing relevant advice on making friends and fitting in at a new school. The suggestions are clear and practical.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with sentence structure and flow that make it slightly difficult to follow at times.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of less precise word choices and repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and punctuation, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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