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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average daily commute times in three countries and the percentage of energy consumption by sector. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

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The image displays two charts: a bar chart and a pie chart. The bar chart, titled 'Average Daily Commute Times (in minutes),' shows data for three countries on its horizontal axis and a vertical axis ranging from 0 to 60. The values are: UK, 45 minutes; USA, 50 minutes; and Japan, 35 minutes. The pie chart, titled 'Energy Consumption by Sector,' presents four segments with their respective percentages: Transport at 29%, Residential at 25%, Industry at 30%, and Other at 16%.

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The graph and pie chart illustrate the average daily commute times in tree country and the percentage of energy consumption by sector.

Overall, it is clear that the average daily commute times in the USA is higher than UK and Japan. Additionally, industry energy consumption by Sector has more percentage than transport, residential or other consumers .

The average daily commute times in UK reached 45 minute, but it Japan the average daily commute times was significantly lower compare to the USA and UK; it reaches around 35 minute. However, the USA overtook those both contries acheiving 50 minute.

The percentage of energy consumption by Sector divided by 4 energy consumer. For industry goes lots of energy consumption accounting for 30% of whole energy. The transport require approximately 29% of whole energy as an industry require a lot of enegry. For residential consumers spend 25% of energy, while for other consumers spend 16% of energy.

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energy: 9

average: 4

daily: 4

commute: 4

times: 4

consumption: 4

percentage: 3

industry: 3

consumers: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses all parts of the task and identifies the main trends in both the bar chart and the pie chart. An overview is provided, which is essential for a good score. However, the response would benefit from improved grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. There are several errors in subject-verb agreement, word choice (e.g., 'tree country' instead of 'three countries'), and sentence construction that occasionally hinder the flow of information. To improve, focus on using more varied cohesive devices and ensuring that comparisons between data points are expressed using more precise academic language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs corresponding to the two charts. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and repetitive sentence structures. To improve, use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Regarding,' 'With respect to') to link ideas more smoothly rather than starting many sentences with the subject directly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic sentence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'tree' instead of 'three', 'contries', 'enegry') and word choice issues (e.g., 'more percentage than', 'goes lots of energy'). To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing data, such as 'comprising,' 'representing,' 'constituting,' or 'accounting for.' Avoid informal phrasing like 'goes lots of energy' and instead use 'Industry accounts for the largest share of energy consumption at 30%.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede communication. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'commute times... is'), pluralization (e.g., '45 minute'), and sentence construction (e.g., 'For industry goes lots of energy...'). There is also a lack of complex sentence structures. Focus on mastering basic sentence accuracy, particularly in how you use prepositions and how you structure comparative sentences. Practice using relative clauses (e.g., 'which accounts for...') to combine ideas and increase grammatical complexity.

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