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Band 7+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays three line graphs depicting Australia's trade with China, Japan, and the United States from 2004 to 2009. Australia's trade with China shows imports increasing from around A$10 billion in 2004 to just under A$50 billion in 2009 and exports rising from over A$10 billion in 2004 to A$40 billion in 2009. Australia's trade with Japan depicts exports peaking at around A$50 billion in 2008 before declining to approximately A$40 billion in 2009, while imports stayed below A$20 billion throughout. Australia's trade with the United States shows imports consistently higher than exports, with imports around A$40 billion in 2004 and dipping to just over A$30 billion by 2009, while exports remained below A$15 billion.

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The line graphs compare Australian trade with three countries in terms of value measured in Australian dollars between 2004 and 2009.

Overall, the value of Australian trade with China experienced a significant rise over the period, while Australia’s trade with Japan and the United States increased slightly.

In 2004, the value of Australian exports to China accounted for more than 10 billion dollars, and it doubled after 2007. This value became approximately 35 billion dollars by 2009. Initially, the value of Australian imports from China was less than 20 billion dollars, and it reached roughly 30 billion dollars finally. The figures converged at 30 billion dollars between 2008 and 2009.

In terms of the value of Australian exports to Japan, the figure doubled from 20 to 40 billion dollars by 2008, and it declined to 30 billion dollars in the last year. The value of Australian imports from Japan and the USA had the same trend, fluctuating around 20 billion dollars with a gradual increase in 2009. Despite the decrease between 2008 and 2009, Australia’s exports to the USA underwent a slight increase, indicating 10 billion dollars.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

dollars: 10

billion: 9

australian: 7

value: 7

trade: 3

between: 3

china: 3

japan: 3

exports: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a clear overview and covers the main trends for all three countries. The overall structure is logical, with a general statement followed by specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., exports to China are stated as 'more than 10 billion' initially, but the visual description indicates 'over A$10 billion' and later 'A$40 billion'; imports from China are described as 'less than 20 billion' initially, but the visual description says 'around A$10 billion' in 2004). Additionally, the description of trade with Japan and the USA could be more precise, particularly regarding the values and trends. To improve, ensure data points are more accurately reported and avoid vague phrases like 'fluctuating around 20 billion dollars' without specific reference to the visual information. The report would benefit from a more detailed comparison of the three countries' trade patterns.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly states the topic and the overall trend. The body paragraphs are logically structured, discussing each country in turn. However, the cohesion could be improved by using more varied linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and between sentences. For example, the transition between the discussion of China and Japan could be smoother. Additionally, the final sentence about the USA feels slightly disconnected from the preceding discussion. Using clearer signposting would enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with words like 'significant rise', 'converged', 'fluctuating', and 'gradual increase'. There is a good range of terms related to trends. However, some expressions could be more precise or natural. For instance, 'it doubled after 2007' could be rephrased as 'it doubled from 2007 onwards' or 'it experienced a twofold increase after 2007'. The phrase 'the figures converged at 30 billion dollars' is effective. To achieve a higher score, aim for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices, such as 'soared', 'plummeted', or 'remained stable', and ensure all terms are used accurately in context. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses (e.g., 'Despite the decrease between 2008 and 2009, Australia's exports to the USA underwent a slight increase'). Punctuation and grammar are largely correct, with only minor issues. For example, 'the value of Australian imports from China was less than 20 billion dollars, and it reached roughly 30 billion dollars finally' could be improved by placing 'finally' before 'reached' for better flow. Overall, the grammar is accurate and does not impede understanding. To reach a band 9, aim for even greater variety in sentence structures and flawless punctuation.

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