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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. Write at least 150 words

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The image depicts estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender for 2000, with data presented in a bar chart format. Developed countries show 1% male, 2% female illiteracy. Latin America/Caribbean shows 10% male, 12% female. East Asia/Oceania shows 8% male, 18% female. Sub-Saharan Africa shows 30% male, 48% female. Arab States show 24% male, 53% female. South Asia shows 34% male, 56% female. Female rates consistently higher across all regions.

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The chart showcases the global illiteracy rate in different regions of the world by gender for the year 2000.

Overall, south africa has the highest rate of females who cannot read and write and other developed countries has the lowest number of people which are illiterate in the region. Other countries showcases the increasing number of youths who are illiterate.

Developed countries have lowest numbers of illiterate proportion which is of only 1 and 2 in male and female respectively in the year 2000. Likewise sub-saharan africa, arab states and south asian countries have almost similar rate for women illiteracy that shows almost above 50 figures and men has fluctuating number in these three countries.

In caribbean region both the gender had almost similar rate but female were slightly higher by 2 portion. Comparing oceania region by other global countries, it had only 9 percentage however female were higher by 10 percentage in the year 2000.

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The report covers the main points of the chart, providing a general overview of illiteracy rates across different regions and genders. There is a clear attempt to highlight key trends and comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as misidentifying 'South Asia' as 'South Africa' and not fully elaborating on all significant regional differences. To improve, ensure accuracy in data representation and strive for a more comprehensive description, covering all notable aspects of the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping regions with similar illiteracy patterns together and using clearer transitions between paragraphs. The second sentence in the second paragraph is unclear and affects the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room for more precise language. For instance, instead of 'number of people which are illiterate,' you could use 'illiteracy rate' or 'percentage of illiterate individuals.' Varying your word choice will enhance the report's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar needs significant improvement. There are errors in article usage ('south africa' should be 'South Africa,' 'other developed countries' should be 'developed countries'), subject-verb agreement ('countries showcases' should be 'countries showcase'), and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will help improve accuracy.

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