Process Diagram

Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents three diagrams comparing areas of West Park Secondary School in 1950, 1980, and 2010. In 1950, the layout shows main road north, with housing (left), school (center), and farmland (bottom left) adjacent to a playground (bottom right). In 1980, the same school is flanked by a car park (left), science block (center), and playground (right), with the playground area reduced and a new sports field (bottom left) replacing the previous farmland. By 2010, the configuration retains the car park (left), school (center), playground (right), increasing the sports field size by incorporating the previous playground's area, pushing the playground further to the right, next to the school's main building and science block.

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The diagrams below illustrate the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Overall, the West Park Secondary School had a lot of changes. It was unplanned, but after the renovation, it changed significantly and improved.

Looking first at the changes in 1950-1980, the houses were removed, and a car park and science block were built instead. Instead of farmland, sports fields were established. In addition, only the main school building and playground remained intact.

After 30 years of repair, the West Park Secondary School has become better. The playground and sports ground have become smaller. And in their old place, a large parking lot was created. In addition, the location of the main school building has not changed since.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

school: 5

changes: 3

secondary: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but includes some inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is somewhat clear, but the description of changes lacks detail and precision. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about the changes in each period and ensure accuracy in describing the transformations. Also, aim for a more structured approach, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to each time frame to enhance clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is vague and doesn't effectively summarize the main changes. The body paragraphs are somewhat disjointed, and the connections between the changes in different periods are not clearly established. Consider using more specific transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the changes over time. For example, use phrases like 'By 1980,' 'Subsequently,' or 'In contrast to 1950' to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and lacks the precision needed to describe the changes effectively. There is some repetition of words like 'change' and 'school.' To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to site development, construction, and spatial arrangement. For example, use words like 'expanded,' 'redeveloped,' 'converted,' 'relocated,' or 'extended' to provide a more detailed and accurate description of the transformations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and article usage. For example, 'West Park Secondary School had a lot of changes' is vague and grammatically awkward. 'After 30 years of repair' is unclear and doesn't accurately reflect the changes. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring correct verb tenses to improve grammatical accuracy. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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