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Band 5+: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter • Explain your situation. • Express your concern • Suggest solution

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Dear Main, I would like you accept my sincere apologies for inconveniences that my further actions concerning non attendance on November 15 may cause.

First and foremost, It would be admirable from your side if you will fully understand my current position. Due to the fact that my wife have been pregnant for nine monthes, she had to set off to hospital recently in order to take precaution of unexpected childbirth. And along with these events, I must attend there with my wife, since it will be my first child.

Nevertheless, I am realaizing that my delay will affect the workflow and the company’s goal. In addition, I should have used the condom to avoid the pregnance and succesfully attend on my first working day.

At the end of the day, in order to compensate my fault, I would recommend you to assign me the responsibilty of achieving the company’s goal and I promise to implement it.

Yours faithfully,

Jovoh.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation could be more concise and professional. The suggested solution is somewhat weak.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication and precision in places. More formal and precise language would improve the overall lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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