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Band 4+: You want to apply for a scholarship your studies write a letter to the university in your letter introduce yourself and your academic background state the course and program you want to join Explain why you need financial help

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Dear sir,

My name is mahnoor i recently completed my intermediate study with the distinction in the science stream. i am writing a letter to keen interest applying for scholarship program to persue the bachelar pf science in your esteemed university.

I am passionate about research and enhance my academic skills under your perfect faculty.unfortunately, due to the financial limitation it is difficult for me to afford tuition fee and related expenses.i am the first member of my family aspiring enter the university.

I would be grateful if you can consider my application for financial aid.please inform me the whole scolarship process and the document require.

Thanku for considering my request i look forward for apositive response.

sincerely,

mahnoor

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and clarity in certain areas would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. Improving the flow and sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks range and sophistication. A wider vocabulary would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors and inaccuracies detract from the overall clarity and impact. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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