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Band 5+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Brandon Smith, I write you in order to transfer to you some doubts that I have about the new gym that you just opened in Ruislip neighbourhood.

First of all, I would like to know which types of membership you are offering, how much do I have to pay for them, and its payment options.

Secondly, I would like to know what activites are in included in each type of membership, in order to choose the one that suits me the best with my daily routine, that to be is honest, is pretty busy.

Finally, if it’s not a bother to you, I would like to get some information about how can I carry out exactly the joining procedure. I would like to insist in this point as I have been in some gyms before, and I have struggled most of the times due to its unconcrete information about it.

I am looking foward to start this new era, as getting fitness was one of my main new year’s resolution, so never is late to start.

Thank you so much in advance. I hope to hear from you soon. Kind regards.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the organization and clarity could be improved for a higher score.

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The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall flow. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there's room for improvement in range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary choices would elevate the letter's lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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