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Band 6+: You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

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Dear Madam,

I am writing to express my sincere interest to learn french language under your guidance.

I am Megha,a graduate student from Lyon,a city situated near to your hometown.In fact,one of my best friends was one of your previous students and she recently passed her exam with desired scores.When we met each other,she recommended your instituition as she is highly satisfied in the classes and practice sessions with you.

Moreover,I am looking forward to migrate to canada;however I could not get invitations in the current draws due to the lack of adequate CRS score for the express entry program.Therefore,I decided to study french as I understand that it is the second language of Canada and a language certification will definitely enhance my chances of getting permenant residency in that country.

I humbly request you to let me know if you have any available slots and kindly update its timings.Furthermore,I would appreciate it if you could send me all the details regarding the course by email;I am attaching my email ID at the end.

Hoping for a prompt reply from you.

Yours faithfully,

Megha

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter fully satisfies the requirements of the task. It is well-organized, clearly explains the reasons for wanting to learn French, how the writer learned about the teacher, and what help is needed. The language is accurate and appropriate for the context.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are a few areas where coherence could be improved. For instance, ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to enhance the flow of information. Also, pay attention to the clarity of connections between sentences within paragraphs to maintain a consistent line of thought.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, and the language used is generally appropriate for the task. However, there are opportunities to enhance the sophistication and precision of your word choice. Consider using more varied and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'recommended your instituition,' you could say 'highly recommended your institution' or 'spoke highly of your institution.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary you use is consistently accurate and natural-sounding.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'learn french language' should be 'learn the French language' or 'learn French.' Also, 'instituition' should be 'institution'. 'permenant' should be 'permanent'. Review basic grammar rules and pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Proofreading carefully will help you identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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