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Band 4+: you want to take a few days off from your job next month. letter to manager.

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dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to inform you about a meriage ceremony of my elder brother that it will be performs next week on sunday.

So, i want to attent this happiest moment of my life. For this reason I will be off for three days from the job of the company.Actually i compleded the one week process before from weakends.Besides, my other friend his name is Muhammad Bilal he knows better on my work. If it have any problem in the service of the company he will solve them.

I would be very thankfull if you accept my request because all of my family members wants to attend this ceremony.meanwhile, I also invited you to attend it and give me a little time for it. I knows that you are very busy but it is my family request to you.

Thank you for time and I am waiting for the positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Akhtar Zaman

Date, 11/11/2025

Word Count: 161

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by requesting time off, but it includes some irrelevant details and inaccuracies. The purpose of the letter is clear, but the explanation could be more concise and professional. To improve, focus on directly stating the request and providing only necessary information. Avoid overly emotional language and ensure the details provided are relevant to the request.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the request clearly. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. The flow of information is disjointed, and the connections between sentences and ideas are not always clear. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on logically structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., transition words, pronouns) to link ideas and sentences smoothly. Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point and that these points connect logically to support your overall message.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive, limiting the precision and impact of the message. There are instances of unnatural phrasing and word choices that affect clarity. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is appropriate for a formal letter. Focus on using synonyms and more precise language to convey your meaning effectively. Pay attention to collocations and idiomatic expressions to make your writing sound more natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, concentrate on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) to add complexity to your writing. Proofread carefully for errors in grammar and punctuation, and consider using grammar-checking tools to identify and correct mistakes.

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