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Band 5+: You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: Explain that you have completed your studies. Give details of the event, including time, date, and dress code. Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for.

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Dear Papa,

How’s everyone over there papa? I hope you all are doing well ! Just last week I completed my last exam and my teachers told that the college is organizing a convocation ceremony for all the recent graduates in the month of October.I would love to have you, mother and Dhruv all to be beside me on this special occasion.

Let me give you some event details.The event is held on October 4th which is on my birthday as you know. The event would be 3 hours long and it would be in the great palace in Rajasthan. There is no dress code for the family so you can wear anything that you like.

I have all the passes arranged for everyone and even the hotel bookings are been taken care of already. You guys just need to come and enjoy.

Can’t wait to see you all soon.

Lots of love,

Hardik.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

event: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, some aspects could be more thoroughly explained for clarity and impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear. However, improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance flow and readability. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and descriptive language would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that detract from accuracy and fluency. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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