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Band 5+: You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, 1) Say what your interest is 2) Explain why the website is unclear 3) Request the information that you need

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Dear Zaryab,

I am interested in photograph course in this year, and I have seen your name on the college website as the content for admission queries. I have several question for you, and I hope you cam help.

Firstly, regarding the cost of course, is the fee of $99 per month or for the whole course? Is it possible to pay for monthly instalments, or is the full up front? The website says that, Other payment method are possible, but there is no explanation.

Secondly, can you tell me what the exact dates for the course are? Your website says’ Summer to Autumn’ but I can not see any specific dates relating to this. I would be grateful for the precise dates, including when I need to pay for the course and buy the books and so on.

I had be appreciate some information about the course content itself, including details of the equipment to be used and wording of the certificate I will receive at the end.The website says that I should contact you for this.

Thank you for your help, and I look forward to receiving the information requested .

kind regards,

Aftab ali.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

website: 4

dates: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's organization is generally clear, but some sentences lack precision, impacting the overall flow. Improving sentence structure would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

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