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Band 5+: You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, 1) Say what your interest is 2) Explain why the website is unclear 3) Request the information that you need

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the application of maths course that is added to the course list last week, because I have keen interest in solving maths problems.

Unfortunately, some information regarding specific things like cost, availability of the course as well as the professor of it is missing from the course website which is making it difficult and also confusing to understand.

Moreover, can you please tell me the exact fees of the course as on website it is written 80 dollars but it should not be more than 50 dollars according to the lady on registration desk. In addition, the professor name as well as the availability of the course need to made clear on the site.

I hope you will address this concern as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Gagandeep Kaur

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