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Band 5+: You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear sir,

I am writing to express my interest in next six months working our head office in UK.

I think I can get a new exposure by going them and get more experience from there and also can be familiar with the new technology. In addition I have my colleagues are working our head office in uk so we can work together and have some discussions. In further I have clear documents and academic qualifications that will be help to minimizing the visa process.

If it is any issues in here I can join via online also you can send me all the updates and any work that I want to concern. I hope I ll do my best without any hesitation.

I hope you will be help me regard this and hope get a good feed back from you. Moreover, If you need any clarification about the documentation please be kind enough to inform me.

Yours faithfully,

Peter Jayakody

Word Count: 161

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by explaining the writer's interest in working at the head office, suggesting how work can be done remotely, and asking for help. However, the reasons for wanting to work at the head office are somewhat vague (e.g., 'get a new exposure'). The explanation of how work will be managed during the absence is also brief and lacks detail. To improve, provide more specific reasons for wanting to work at the head office and elaborate on the arrangements for managing your work while away. Also, ensure the tone is consistently professional.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the transitions between ideas could be smoother. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to connect your ideas and ensure a logical flow. For example, you could use phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition to,' or 'Therefore' to guide the reader through your reasoning. Additionally, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey your ideas effectively. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to professional development and international work experience. For instance, instead of saying 'get a new exposure,' you could say 'gain valuable insights' or 'broaden my professional horizons.' Using more specific and sophisticated language will enhance the impact of your letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('a,' 'an,' 'the'). For example, 'working our head office' should be 'working at our head office,' and 'I have my colleagues are working' should be 'I have colleagues who are working.' Proofreading carefully and focusing on sentence structure will improve the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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