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Band 4+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Mr Cooper,

This is Georgia Henry employed as a Sales representative in your company, today I have been writing to you as I want to get enrolled in training that will be held from 21st of August to 10th September.

A few days back, I read an article in the newspaper titled ”Importance of Digital Presence for Global Expansion of Business” that would briefly explain the latest innovations in technology and the ways these could be utilised for expansion in a business.

Consequently, I want you to read about this course and off course if you would find it could assist our company to earn more money than help me for attending lectures there. Please provide me with a vacation from 20th August to 11th September and I would be glad if you could utilise the training funds and provide me with some money for the cost of travelling and the tuition fees, which is $1,000 dollars.

Since I assume it could be a great opportunity to learn about changes and how to effectively utilise the latest technology and develop business techniques, also, it would be an effective way to improvise our techniques of marketing, especially for the brand that we are launching in the upcoming year.

Thanks for your consideration and the time you have devoted. Please provide me with an update, so I could pursue the registration process as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,

Georgia Henry.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

could: 5

would: 4

provide: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing a clear description of the course, explaining the benefits for the company, and outlining the support needed. However, the letter could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not quite precise or natural. There are opportunities to use more sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and punctuation. The use of grammar is not always accurate or consistent.

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