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Band 6+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear sir,

I am Kesha Shah, employed in a financial department at Scotiabank as a business analyst. I am writing this letter to request you allow me to pursue a course from University of Ottawa.

Last week, while browsing the internet, I saw an advertisement of a course named “Smart talk”. This course is offered only in summer, and it is a part-time course. Being a business analyst, I need to possess good communication skill and this course will help me improving it. Moreover, it will help in enhancing my presentation and creativity skill. Additionally, this course is effective not only cost wise but also time wise. At the end of the course, I will also receive a certificate which will be a valuable addition for our firm.

It would be great if the organization either allow me to do part-time work or grant me a leave of absence for three months to succeed in completing this course. In addition, my job includes collaborating with stakeholders. Hence, after completing this course, I can do it very efficiently.

Hoping for your careful consideration!

Yours sincerely,

Kesha Shah

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the course and its benefits to the job are clear. However, the request for company assistance could be more specific and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

6

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences lack a strong connection to the preceding ones.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the letter's impact.

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