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Band 5+: You work in a very busy office that has some problems. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your office and you have decided to apply for this job Write a letter to your employer In your letter : 1) say why you would like the job of supervisor 2) explain why you would be a suitable candidate for this job 3) describe the problems in your office and changes you would like to make.

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apply a job as a supervisor. I believe, I have all necessary characteristics which is required for a good supervisor.

I will explain why I am suitable for this position. Firstly, I have a lot of patience and five years of experience which helps me to deal with staff members as well as tasks which occurs on daily basis in an efficient way .Apart from this I have been the employee of the year of 2022 and 2023.

The major issue is inappropriate use of technology because all workers use conventional method to represent the presentation rather than the uses of modern appliances. So, I would like to make alter the method of representation.I am confident that all my alterations would be proved fruitful for our organization.

I would be most grateful if you could reply as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Kajal,

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Task Response

The letter addresses all three points of the task, but the explanations provided are quite brief. To improve, consider expanding on why you would like the job, why you are a suitable candidate, and the changes you would like to make in more detail.

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The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly into paragraphs to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words could be more precise. Additionally, try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary to demonstrate a higher level of lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings throughout the letter. Work on improving sentence structures and grammar accuracy to achieve a higher score in this criterion.

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