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Band 5+: You would like a job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people. Write a letter to the organiser of the summer camp. In your letter: *describe your personality *say what relevant experience and skills you have *explain what sort of work you would like to do

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in a post of Event planner in your summer camp. I saw your advertisement in the Tribune dated 1/15/2025.

I am Jeff khols resident of Brampton. I have done my graduation degree in Event Management. Currently, I am working full time as an Event assistant and have organized around 500 sports events specifically for kids in last year, so I believe I would be the perfect candidate for this position.

I have 5 years experience with ” ZAUQ Events ” which is an esteemed event company in Mississauga, Canada. I am master in organizing events related to children sports and outdoor games for youngsters such as soccer, basketball and tennis. moreover, I also have technical skills

And office administration experience which would be helpful for some office work.

I am ready to do any task, but it would be appreciated if you assign me work related to event planning like choosing the venue and budget. I am attaching my resume along with this letter. I assure you that if you hire me for the job, I would prove an asset for your company.

Hoping for a favourable response from you side regarding my application!

Yours faithfully,

Jeff Khols

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
event: 5
would: 4
events: 3
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Task Response

6.5
The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The candidate clearly expresses their interest and provides relevant details about their experience and skills. However, more detail on personality could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5
The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and smoother transitions between ideas. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6
The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. More sophisticated language would elevate the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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