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Band 6+: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to ask you about some electrical goods which I certainly want for my new house. I want to know Do you have vaccum cleaner, steam iron, Dish washer and microwave oven available at your store? If not, would you be able to arrange them for me?

Further more, I want to enquire about their prices as well. kindly provide me list of prices of different companies so that I may order the best available offer. Nowadays, different schemes are being offered by electrical goods stores to attract valuable customers so kindly send me all details.

Moreover, would you hold these items for some time for me? If so then for how many days?because i will pick those items on 1st of April, when we will shift to our new house. I want you to share all the details as soon as possible.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Saima Kazmi

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, but could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, affecting the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

6.5

A good range of vocabulary is used, but some choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There are a few grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and punctuation, which could be improved.

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Band 6+: You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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