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Band 5+: You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part-time. Write a letter to your boss.

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Dear Mr. Patel,

I am writing to request to make reduction in my work hours as I am going to start part time study at Georgian College.

I am planning to take some courses related to CNC programming starting from 1st of next month. My classes will be in morning from 8AM to 10PM every Monday and Tuesday, and I will need some time after classes to prepare notes and assignments, which will make hard for me to work full time on those days. Because of that, I would be able to work work from 12PM to 4PM.

As you know I have been struggling with programming at work , since I joined, these cuorse surely help me to gain better understanding and will lead me to improve my perfomance at work. As a result, it will help to increase quality as well as production of parts , which is in the beneficiery of the company.

please consider my request of changing work time.

thank you

yours faithfully

Aamir

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the reason for the request (part-time study), detailing the schedule conflict, and highlighting the potential benefits to the company. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details about your current working hours and the exact reduction you are requesting. Also, proofread for grammatical errors and typos.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction stating your request, a body paragraph explaining the reasons and benefits, and a concluding paragraph reiterating your request and expressing gratitude. This will enhance the flow and clarity of your message.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more precise and varied language to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'make reduction,' you could say 'request a reduction.' Also, be careful with spelling ('cuorse' should be 'course,' 'perfomance' should be 'performance,' and 'beneficiery' should be 'benefit').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of your writing. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage. For example, 'I am writing to request to make reduction' should be 'I am writing to request a reduction.' Also, 'these cuorse surely help me' should be 'these courses will surely help me.' Proofread carefully to catch these errors.

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