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Band 4+: Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips. Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school – Explain why you are interested in the position – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

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Dear sir

My name is jolly Dileep. Juwel Mary’s mother. She is studying at 4th standard. Her class teacher is swapana mam.I am writing this letter to express my willingness to volunteer for the school science trips. I exciting for this kind of volunteer because I like to spend More Time with my child

my humble request if I am given this opportunity to accompany students on this trip. Then more time to spend with my kids . the school is provides education to my children . I feel this is the best way by providing my valuable time to your institution.

Then I have also worked as a museum instructor in few years back so I am having experience in handling children very carefuly . And I know how to manage children.however this is your response so please discuss with high authority. I will get a positive response from your institution to work as a volunteer.

Your’s faithfully

Jolly Dileep

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing the required information. However, it could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the writing is disjointed. The grammar errors further hinder the coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some instances of informal language and repetition. A wider range of vocabulary could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of punctuation and sentence structure needs improvement.

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