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Band 5+: Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Headmaster,

I hope this letter finds you well

My Name is Jonathan Mquare, my family is new in this town. My purpose write this letter because I would to register my son in your school that you handle. I would like to show you about his background in academic achievements in his school before we move to this town and what the scope of interests he likes.

My reason I moving to this town because of my job, and then I should brings my family with me. Therefore I want to register my son in your school. Jerry is Smart and diligent, he always got the champion class. and then, he always interest with many extracurriculars in the school and I also believe that he will make you satisfied with his character wich is always help people and love beeing volunter.

I hope you will be considering about my son bagrounds and if you have any further information, please let me know.

kind regards,

Jonathan Mquare

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the purpose of the request and providing relevant information about the son. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed presentation of the son's academic achievements and interests.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but the range is limited, and some word choices are not precise. Expanding vocabulary and using more sophisticated language would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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