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Band 5+: Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

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Dear sir/madam

I am writing to inform you my family decide to move another city because of some reasons. First of all , i will represent about my son education credits which he got in his carrer in his recent school. My son got a A garde in maths and science which is most popular subjects in school which helps to know about basic daily calculations and basic concept of science which plays an important role in educational carrer.

My son is basically better in all the subjects that he studied in his recent tenth grade. in terms of interest, maths , science and physical education is interested part of my son interest because he wants himself as a physically fit . To get fitness level he did a dailyn excercise in gym and win a ist place in school race which was organised by his school physical club. Thanks for your proper attention .

your faithfully

Rahul Gandhi

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the family's relocation and the son's academic achievements and interests. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed presentation of information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and organizational issues. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is functional but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices and precise language would improve the letter's lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and overall impact. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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