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Band 4+: Your friend has a problem. Write a letter giving advice.

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Dear friend.

I am writing to letter about you have a problem. I give some advice for you. Firstly you have a problem due to your study. You do not worry about it, because I trying hard to understand everything.

You need to know basic problem. Likely it is connecting your knowledge. So you don’t give up,because you achieve more success by studies. I know you have two exam at the University. I believe that you make a decision with me. This exam does not difficult, it is strainforward, also you need search other data by phone or Google. It help to know important information. You have more opportunities by learning something to exam.

I think, my advices give to improve your skill. So I am very happy to help you. I wait reply your exam results.

See you

Jasmina.

Word Count: 140

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Overall Band Score

4
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
problem: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

4
The letter attempts to address the task but contains irrelevant and inaccurate information, detracting from the overall task achievement. The advice is quite general and lacks specific, actionable steps. To improve, focus on providing concrete suggestions and ensuring the advice directly relates to the friend's study problems. Also, pay close attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the advice being given. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. To improve, focus on structuring your advice into clear, logical sections, each addressing a specific aspect of the problem. Use transitional phrases to connect ideas and guide the reader through your reasoning.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey advice effectively. There is repetition of simple words and phrases. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to giving advice, expressing encouragement, and discussing academic challenges. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and more precise words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors.

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