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Band 6+: Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach a basic English programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programme coordinator. In your letter: explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme describe why you are a suitable candidate say when you are available to teach.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Alex, and I am writing this letter to express my interest in teaching a basic English to refugees during my free time.

I work as a English teacher at the Oxford university and I have been in this profession for last 4 years. I would like do unpaid work because I earn well, and like to get different experiences regarding teaching.

I think I am a suitable candidate because I recently completed my PHD in English. Moreover, I get numerous awards in my career, which I really appreciate. I also like teaching others because it helps me to interact with different kind of students and people, which really adds valuable experiences in my life.

I am available on weekends from 9 am to 5pm. I would like to utilize my leisure my by teaching someone. Could you please let me know when I can join?

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Alex.

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B1 - Intermediate
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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The response is clear and mostly fulfills the requirements.

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The letter's structure is generally logical, but some improvements in flow and paragraphing would enhance readability. Minor issues with coherence are present.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter. Some lexical choices could be more sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

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