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Band 4+: Your local council is planning to hold an election to choose members from the society but there are no young people on the council and you think that the council needs young people's views. You are thinking of standing for election. Write a letter to the head of the council. In your letter, state why you want to be elected mention why you think you would be a good candidate describe your qualities, skills, experience, interests, if any

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Dear sir

I am writing this letter about society election. I want to share my opinion for young people on the council because we needs young people’s views and thoughts.

I live in your society. As we know in ouyr society old members planning to an election for choose some new members for take our residence responsibilities. Example: security, maintainance, and any type of issues members can handle. That is why mostly societies make a commity. Which is useful for society. According to election. I want to participate in 2025 election for elcted to become a members. When ever in our commity maximum people beecome old age person nobody young. I Know old people is good for us because they have experienced But young views also needs for our decisions.

I am well educated person. I know how to handle new generation issue. I am good in my talking sense. I will take physically and mentally isuues which is related to our society. I am interested to do something for make a good place.

Yours truly

Shuaib Alam

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

society: 5

election: 4

young: 4

members: 4

people: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by expressing the desire to run for election and providing reasons. However, it could be improved by more clearly outlining the candidate's platform and how it specifically addresses the needs of young people.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is understandable, but the organization and flow could be significantly improved. Paragraphing and transitions between ideas need work to enhance clarity and readability.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and coherence. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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