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Band 7+: Your manager has invited you to work on a team project He/she has asked you to suggest another employee to work on the project with you, Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain: 1 why you are interested in the project 2 suggest another employee and say why he she would be suitable 3 ask your manager some questions about the project

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my appreciation and interest in the opportunity you gave me in the new big data analytics project.

I am very interested in working with such a great team members and to be able to apply my ideas and knowledge of big data into this project.

I think it will be very helpful to invite Sara from Marketing department to the team. This is because we need someone with marketing background and experience to make sure we deliver understandable insights out of the data. And I can not think of anyone better than her.

I also have a few questions in mind, could you please clarify the timeline is it at the beginning or the end of December? I would also like to know what the budget limit is and whether we are responsible for any expenses.

I look forward to your response.

Yours faithfully,

Noura.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining interest, suggesting an employee with justification, and asking relevant questions. The content is relevant and sufficient. To improve, consider adding more specific details to strengthen the reasons for your interest in the project and the suitability of the suggested employee. Also, ensure the tone remains consistently professional throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and the purpose is clear. However, some transitions could be smoother to enhance the flow. For example, when transitioning from expressing interest to suggesting a colleague, a clearer link could be established. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and conveys the message effectively. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more specific and varied vocabulary related to project management and data analytics. For instance, instead of 'great team members,' you could use 'highly skilled professionals' or 'esteemed colleagues.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, the sentence 'I am very interested in working with such a great team members and to be able to apply my ideas and knowledge of big data into this project' has issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. It could be revised to 'I am very interested in working with such great team members and applying my knowledge of big data to this project.' Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure to improve grammatical accuracy.

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