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Band 5+: Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Manager

I am writing to let you know about a issue. The office don’t have parking area to employement wheres this facilities very important.

The company should had provide a space for area to employe cars and that all have considered make building before. Because it is will useful to another them that work in our office and more safe with him because if employees dont have area parking the people that work in your company often losse thing. Actually, in the beside our office have place aroud fivety meters² that can be use to it.

I will to inquire to creat with you so that be able for making a parking area for ours vichencel in beside workplace morever all that helpful our as one of alternative without difficult looking for places before work.

I am hoping coming soon to creating all it. Thanks you so much have attention

Sincerely

Raffy aldiyan

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

office: 3

parking: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the problem and the suggestion could be clearer and more detailed. The benefits to employees are mentioned but could be more persuasively articulated.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing disrupt the flow and make it difficult to follow at times. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks precision and sophistication in places. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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