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Band 7+: Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am currently working for SHB Company located on the 25th floor of our building. I am writing this letter to inform you of the inconvenience that our employees have due to the lack of parking facilities in the building.

Most workers in my company drive cars to work and because there are no parking spaces available within the territory of the building, the nearest place they can park is at the supermarket 600m away from the office. This means that an average worker has to walk an average 1.2km daily to get to and from their car.

I suggest that we should use the vacant land at the back of the office as a temporary car park while thinking of a more long-term solution. I believe having a parking lot next to the office would save a lot of time and energy for the employees and allow them to work more effectively.

Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to hearing back from you.

Yours sincerely,

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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parking: 3

office: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, clearly explaining the problem, suggesting a solution, and detailing the benefits of parking for employees. The content is relevant and sufficiently developed. To further enhance the response, consider adding specific details to strengthen the arguments, such as quantifying the time saved or mentioning specific benefits to the company's productivity.

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The letter is well-organized and the message is easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical and contributes to the overall coherence. To further enhance cohesion, consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly within and between paragraphs. For example, you could add transition words or phrases to clarify the relationships between your points.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate and effectively conveys the message. To demonstrate a wider range, try incorporating more specific or nuanced vocabulary related to the topic of parking and employee benefits. For instance, instead of 'save a lot of time and energy,' you could use phrases like 'significantly reduce commute-related stress' or 'optimize employee time management.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar with only minor errors. Ensure consistent use of articles (a/an/the) and double-check sentence structures for clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage to maintain accuracy throughout the letter.

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