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Band 4+: Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear manager,

I hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter regarding for parking. There are many issues while parking.

Our office buliding does not have a parking facility often employers face many situation. Below the office there are no parking zone. Employers park their vehicles far a way from office. And walk one k.m and arrive the office.

We have been face in daily routine. Employers are exhausted for parking distance. When our office living time after then we are walk to reach our vehicles.

Furthermore, employers can arrive office easily when you solve this problem. And it is beneficial for all employers. Parking facility is ample need for office employees.

I look forward to your reply.

Your faithfully,

Aman mekwan

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the problem and suggesting solutions. The benefits to employees could be more comprehensively explained. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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4.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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