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Band 5+: Your office building doesn't have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope you are doing well.

The purpose of writing this letter is to inform you about troubles which our employees are facing due to not availability of parking spot in the premises.

Because of not enough parking spots, workers have to park their vehicles on the street parking which cause risk sometimes. Besides this, employees have to do pay parking with high hourly rates nearby to our organization.

To prevent this issue, company should reserve some parking spots. Apart from that,Jobholders should also receive compensation for parking including with their pay.

By solving this problem, employees will not have to reach early to the office for finding spots. Apart from that, workers could share their reserved parking with their colleagues during their day offs.

I hope you understand our concern. And my provided suggestion would help you to do betterment.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Dhruvi Patel

Word Count: 154

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

parking: 7

their: 5

employees: 3

spots: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The suggestions are relevant and the explanation is clear.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved for better clarity and impact. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient but lacks range and sophistication. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is generally understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall fluency and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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Your office building doesn’t have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

Your office building doesn’t have parking available. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say why parking will benefit all employees

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