Band 5+: 📝TASK 2: Many parents and teachers think it is important to supervise children's activities. Others argue they should have freedom. Discuss the both sides and give your opinion.

While some individuals believe that adults should monitor youngsters intimately, others think that children must be provided more freedom. I believe that independence is one of the crucial aspects of developing analythical thinking in young mindsets. I will duscuss both sides of this topic and give my own opinion.

One the one hand, a strict control help children to avoid a cyber fraud and a mocking on the internet. Moreover, it also influences negatively, if youngsters will be not controlled by mature individuals, it can create wrong mindset. For example, the majority of younger population prefer introducing themselves like alpha male by humiliating others, so it causes earlier mental problems which affect on the young future interaction with people who around them, and lead to a dramatic reverse in their behaviour.

On the other hand, to build up a successful career in any field, people must be had an independence in making decisions or solving problems without any consequences, and exactly these specularities are appreciated greatly among major coorporations. In this case, providing a chance for children to act on their own is beneficial for them to become confidence and successful or even may be self-relient that can assist them to perform more productively.

In my opinion, the most important part of being without any monitor by seniors, it is developing critical thinking, because it provides an understanding of a problem of a exact issue and finding an answer in a matter of seconds, that illustrates a high IQ level. In addition, I believe that the young are losing their potentials and chances to become qualified specialists, because of isolation, so they should not be controled, they should be aware their current postion.

In conclusion, although some people who believe that the best approach, to object youngsters became hard-working, is monotoring them, but individuals who want to establish freedom in their lives in order to develop unique qualities which can help them to outperform that children who were controlled by mature generation.