Band 4+: Around the world, many animal species become extint every year. Some people say that countries and individuals must try to solve this problem. Others, however, believe it is more important to concentrate on the problems of human beings than on those concerning animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, every human beings thought about themself only, rather than looking on species of animals; who are surviving at the border of extinction. Although, some animals are prefered to grow up in proper envioronment, which their body demand to have for comfortable lifestyle. On the other hand, some individuals prefer to prioritise other problems of human beings.

To be precise, the main factor behind extinction of some animal species is the accomodation that can’t provide to them properly, although it is must for them to survive. Some animal species have their own peace of comfort, which help to grow up themself in proper weather and an envioronment. The reason behind this is, the healthy lifestyle must required for them to grown up in that place with contrast of accumulation. Some animal species demans the peace arround them if they don’t get it; it will become so frustration for them to live that place. For instance, an ancient animal species namely dinasour who extinct before 500 years due to not getting the proper enviornment and space of comfort, which they demand the most. Additionally, There are some myths buzzing over it that this species never exist but in history there are pages dedicated to this species.

On the other hand, some human beings discussed that some other problem should demand attention too to solve it. In that case, crucial problem of nowadays is significantly increasing global warming subsequently, Deforestation is the responsible factor for this problems. Although, global warming is increasing magnificently, which can affect human beings health as well as can give entry to major diseases by its influetion. Lastly, some people used to cut the trees, in order to fulfil their necessity.

In conlusion, although some animal species are got extinct it can be change with use of proper accomodation. I firmly belive that, there are some human beings problems which should have equal attention as well as

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