🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!
Discussion

Band 6+: hile some people think that it is their parents' duty, as they are the ones who are responsible for inserting codes of conduct into their children's minds, others argue that these young criminals have to receive punishment for their negative actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Note: Both the topic and the essay were created by one of our users.

People’s opinions are divided on who will be charged for the crime children have committed. While some people think that it is their parents’ duty, as they are the ones who are responsible for inserting codes of conduct into their children’s minds, others argue that these young criminals have to receive punishment for their negative actions. Although both schools of thought hold merits, I more agree with the latter view for several reasons.

Granted, it seems right to accuse parents of the bad behaviors that their children have done. This is because family plays an important role in nurturing and directing children’s inner feelings and thoughts in order to help them fully develop and become good adults. Therefore, if the children commit a minor or serious crime, it might be because their parents have not fully taken their responsibility to tell them right from wrong, and they should be punished for this. However, this line of reasoning is not sound, as there are many other factors contributing to the development of a child. It is difficult to say whether family or external agents, such as schools or friends, have greater impacts on one’s behaviors.

Furthermore, on the individual scale, an irresponsible mindset can be conducted in their young mind if they are not charged for their bad behaviors. This is predicated on the assumption that people usually learn from their mistakes, but in this case, children cannot learn anything because they do not need to deal with the consequences. This would hurdle the development progress of these children. On the society scale, if a child knows someone else will take the responsibility for their actions, they may have a tendency to reoffend their crime until they reach mature age, creating a chaotic world where children are able to do anything they want.

In conclusion, saying parents should be charged for their children’s crimes is undervaluing the influence of other factors on children’s development, such as friends or schools. In addition, children need to take responsibility on their own not only for developing but also for protecting social security.

Word Count: 348

Other Topics:

Some people think that learning should stop once formal education finishes. Others believe that people should continue learning throughout their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people think that individuals shouldn’t study after their graduation. Others think that learning should continue throughout their lives. Personally, learning is an important part of human life, but it depends on a person’s career and personal goals. On the one hand, many people believe that learning should continue throughout life, especially in certain […]

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Throughout history, people have been wondering what things in life make them happy. One of the first things that comes to some people’s minds is money. But how exactly can money provide happiness and what other can provide happiness? In this text I’ll discuss how exactly money makes one happy and what other methods or […]

ADVANTAGES DISADVANTAGES ESSAY 1 Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of possessing an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, increasing number of people have lived longer than ever before in the past. This situation brings undeniable benefits, such as better guidance to society and support to family members, but it also creates serious problems like increasing non working age group and increasing budget in health sectors. The most compelling advantage is […]

It is often said that urban green spaces are a luxury that cities cannot afford given the pressing need for housing and infrastructure. However, others contend that such areas are essential for the physical and mental well-being of city dwellers. Discuss both sides and provide your opinion.

It is often argued that urban green spaces, particularly in densely populated cities, should be replaced with residential buildings to address the growing demand for housing. This view is partly justified, as rapid population growth and increasing urbanisation have intensified housing shortages. However, I believe that preserving green spaces is equally important because they contribute […]

Some people think eating meat is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by a number of people that meat is unhealthy to eat. From my point of view, I utterly oppose this statement because it is obvious that meat is important to gain enough protein and humans are developed by the initial dieting habit including meat consumption which means human bodies are supposed maintain […]

In many places, people's lifestyles are changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years,rapid lifestyle changes have become increasingly common in many parts of the world.Changes in technology,working patterns,and social habits have influenced the way family members communicate and spend time together.Although these changes may sometimes create problms,I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because modern lifestyle can improve family living condition and create better […]

See All
We have detected unusual activity on your device.
Please verify your identity to continue.
Note: This verification step won't sign you in. If you have a premium account, please log in to access the service as usual.
Google/Gmail Verification
Or verify using Email/Code
We've sent a verification code to:
youremail@gmail.com (Not your email?)
Enter it below to complete the verification process.
Ensure your email address is correct, your inbox is not full, and you check your spam folder. If no email arrives, consider using an alternative email.
You will need a Premium plan to perform your action!
Note: If you already have a premium account, please log in to access our services as usual.

Plans & Pricing

Our mission is to make quality education accessible for everyone.
However, to keep our hardworking team running and this service alive, we genuinely need your support!
By opting for a premium plan, not only do you sustain us in achieving the mission, but you also unlock advanced features to enrich your learning experience.

Free

For learners who aren't pressed for time

What's included on Free
100+ Cambridge IELTS Tests
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation (2 times/month)
Instant IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator (2 times/month)
500+ Dictation & Shadowing Exercises
100+ Pronunciation Exercises
Flashcards
Other Advanced Tools

Premium

For those serious about advancing their English proficiency, and for IELTS candidates aspiring to boost their band score by 1-2 points (especially in writing & speaking) in just 30 days or less

What's included on Premium
Save Your IELTS Test Progress & Analyze Mistakes By Question Type
Save Your Own Flashcard Sets & Use Them On Any Device
Unlock All Courses, IELTS Tests, Section & Part Practice
Unlimited AI Conversations
Unlimited AI Writing Enhancement Exercises
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Evaluation
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Evaluation
Checked Answers Will Not Be Published
Unlimited IELTS Writing Task 1 & 2 Essay Generator
Unlimited IELTS Speaking Part 1, 2, & 3 Sample Generator
Unlimited Usage Of Advanced Tools & AI Features
Priority Support within 24h (12-month plan only)

Due to the nature of our service and the provided free trials, payments are non-refundable.