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Band 4+: If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

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It is admittedly true that education is one of the most fundamental necessities in human lives .Although every literacy systems is not appropriate in my country nowadays,and several changes that require to be undertake such as prioritize on online classes instead of offline courses and focusing on practical knowledge rather than memorizing knowledge. This essay will delve into the two reasons behind this shift while also acknowledging how this changes would develop the educational system in my state.

On the one hand,there are two significant changes I would like to make for improving the literacy system in my country.

Firstly,offline courses are extremely renowned nowadays,students who lived further away from their institutions and do not have the proper monetary stability,could not stay in the hostels and cannot attend their classes regularly, leading to detrimental implications on their academic studies. However, prioritizing on the online learning methods would tremendously boost the preferences of learners in the education. Students who not access of appropriate infrastructures, Online learning method could tremendously mitigate theire obstacles. For instance,during the COVID-19 outbreak in 2020-2021,offline lectures are closed due to lockdown,during that time online institutions like 10 minutes school,Bondi-pathsala had significantly eradicated the obstacles of learning during that time.

On the one hand,there are also numerous changes for developing educational system ,which can be done by a number of factors. To begin with, most of the institutions in my nation are much more reliable on mnemonics for gaining knowledge. It not only reduced students creativity but also take them further distance from proper educational sense. Practical learning strategy can control these barriers without difficulties. For instance,in Japan , every week their educational institutions organized Semmars and educational programmes in raising awareness and practical knowledge among students. As a result of this, Japan is single handedly led the whole world in terms of their innovations and construction techniques.

In conclusion, while the upward trajectory of online lectures and prioritize on practical learning are the two incredible ways of improving education system. In my opinion, moving to these changes will make students much more advance in education as well as it will boost their creativity.

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