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Band 4+: It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on are involved in a child's upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that it is better for kids if they raise surrounded by an extended family, where each relative takes part in rearing the child, rather just their parents. This essay totally disagrees with this idea, because parent’s upbringing methods may not coincide with those of other relatives and parents are responsible for their kids.

Firstly, everybody has their own opinion on parenting and everyone’s opinion is different. In other words if parent’s opinion doesn’t matches with on of the relatives the can quarrel and then have a bad attitude. For example: most East Asian countries where the concept of mother-in-law and daughter-in-law and upbringing are different and the daughter-in-law has to give in to the mother-in-law due to the experience of the wisdom of age.

Secondly, Parents are the ones accountable for their child. This means that if something happens to the child, they will be the ones held liable, not other relatives. For instance: For example, if a child gets injured while playing outside, it is the parents who will have to take responsibility for medical treatment and ensure the child’s well-being.

In conclusion, it’s better for children if they upbring only by their parents. Because they are the one how are responsible for them and the views of parent’s relatives may vary.

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