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Band 7+: Nowadays many people think that sport stars are attracting too much public attention and earning too much money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Currently a lot of people consider that sportsmen are receiving too much attention and earning biggest amounts of money. I completely agree with this idea, firstly, due to the sacrifices they make and secondly, because of their risk in career.

The first argument to discuss is possible mental and physical issues. In other words, sportspeople spend their childhood training and taking part in various competitions, which can lead to excessive stress. Moreover, a strict schedule and permanent injuries might result in health problems, such as chronic back pain or broken bones that never fully heal.

The second idea is the short-term career of sportsmen. Instead of having a stable job for forty years like a doctor or a teacher, an athlete can usually work for only ten years. They must earn enough money to survive for the rest of their lives in very short time. A single accident can destroy their career in one second, leaving them with nothing. For instance, a runner can tear a muscle in one race and lose their job forever.

To conclude, I believe that athletes deserve their high salaries. This money is a fair compensation for their stolen childhood and the permanent damage to their health. Their professional life is very short, and since they can lose everything in just one second, so they must earn enough to protect their future.

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