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Band 7+: Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during free time other say that in this way children are under pressure

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In recent years, the allocation of children’s free time to study has sparked considerable debates among parents. Some argue that educational activities should also occupy part of leisure time while others consider it overwhelming for children. I agree with the latter view. This essay will examine both statements before giving my conclusion.

On the one hand, it is clear why many parents demand their child dedicate part of their free time to gaining knowledge. These days, a diploma has become a vital asset in demonstrating one’s potential to become a successful, high-paid worker. Parents of high school students, in particular, are extremely concerned about ensuring their child achieves excellent marks. For example, Chinese students often spend at least 15 hours a day studying, as they understand that underperforming academically could be detrimental to their future job chances and financial stability.

On the other hand, studying outside school hours, especially during leisure time, may affect a child’s mental wellbeing and could exhaust them. Free time also plays a vital part in a child’s social and emotional development, allowing then to build relationship and creativity – opportunities that structured study cannot provide. For instance, children who spend their free time playing with friends or joining group activities tend to develop stronger social skills and greater emotional stability than those whose time is dominated by extra study.

In conclusion, while academical study plays an essential role in shaping a child’s future prospects, I believe leisure time should not be sacrificed for it, as it equally significant for a child’s emotional wellbeing and overall development.

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