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Band 5+: Some people believe that young people should be encouraged to work or volunteer in their communities after finishing school, while others think this should be a personal choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is a debate over which path they should take,which a group of people claiming that young people should attend university.However,others do not share the same view,arguing that it is better to find a job after secondary school,while both views have merits,I tend to agree with the former.

On the one hand,getting a job straight after school has it’s own benefits.For instance,when people start working from teen ages,they get used to be more independent and responcible,especially – financially.Since they start to work and earn early they will be separated from parents and will be able to make their own decisions.Moreover,those people will have an experience,even if they do not know theory,which will help them to find a suitable job with satisfactory salary.

Nonetheless,getting higher education has some benefits.One of the most advantages is better career opportunities.Not only since some employees ask for a degree, but also because there are a lot of occupations which requires it.For instance,people who did not graduated a university can not work as a surgeon or judge,because their one mistake can ruin a person’s whole life, that is why for these professions students have to study for several years,and know not only what to do in experience,but also a theory.

In conclusion,while people debate wheater secondary school students should ger a higher education or find a job,personally I believe that people can make a career and be successful without a diploma, but education is one of the most important fundaments of future,if they want to be really good specialist.

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